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Peter Nyberg



The New Website

2020-10-01; 21:34:52 EDT

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2016-04-14

Posts: 707

Tom,

Thanks for the kind words.

I took a look at the tweak you suggested, thinking you had a good point, but the whole paragraph is:

“The Rhodes 22 is the only boat made by General Boats. There's no larger model to move you up to. So they put the features into the only model they have.”

I’m no english major, and I write by what sounds right with knowing any rules.  I think the first sentence makes it clear we’re talking about boats made my General Boats, and somehow having ‘made by’ in the first sentence paired with ’the only model they make’ in the last sentence, grates on my ears a little.  I could be convinced I’m wrong on that though.

The link to the old site is definitely not something I’m wedded to.  My initial thought in putting it there was that it gave people an easy way to compare new vs. old and maybe point out something I’d overlooked.  

If there are security or privacy issues that need to be addressed in the development of the new site,  someone else is going to have to spearhead that issue.  It’s just not something I know anything about.  Of course, I’m willing to help out where I can.

—Peter 

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